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  • rafalborynski commented on the post, Why Poverty?, on the site Life. 5 years, 10 months ago

    Stories involving the supernatural rub me the right way. We have to live with the same old rules of reality all the time, but at least our writing can afford to be a bit kinky. The one thing I would change in this story if I was writing it would be to make it not […]

  • Dear Margarita, I adore the bittersweet tones of your writing, the kind when you’re walking through a desolate snowy street in the middle of the night, hypnotized by the romantic beauty of such an environment while simultaneously moaning in agony at the cold winter’s wind shivering up your spine. Such is the portrait, no , […]

  • rafalborynski commented on the post, Why Poverty?, on the site abbeysmom 5 years, 11 months ago

    What makes this poem mesmerizing is that the mother knows that the grim reaper , death personified, will take her unborn child. Perhaps this is one of those situations where it is better not to know. A mother that is aware of such a future would obviously be filled with despair yet acceptance, a juxtaposition […]

  • rafalborynski commented on the post, Why Poverty?, on the site TheBaconnater 5 years, 11 months ago

    Surprise is a concept usually associated with prose , not poetry, which makes any incorporation of suspense into a poem all the more innovative and appreciate. As the poem builds from line to line and romantic images of walking through a poem are evoked. i am through sensory imagery led to believe that the companion […]

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